Blackwater Writing Project

June 12, 2007

I taste salt looking
at the storm through my window.
Your eyes, grey as rain.

I love Haiku. This was good. I use these in my room a lot to teach rhythm.

By Adam, at 3:44 PM
I like the use of taste in the haiku. Taste is the most difficult sense for me to incorporate in my writing.

By Donna Sewell, at 5:03 PM
I don't know why, but I wanted a margarita after I read this.

By Andrea, at 2:31 PM